On Tue, 21 Jun 2016 06:01:52 +1000 Ben M <PuZZleDucK+softwarefreedom@gmail.com> wrote:
Hi all,
I've mashed up all our ideas and suggestions and have something rather presentable here: https://etherpad.wikimedia.org/p/fsm-City-of-Casey
Please don't leave comments as this is what we will be sending, but do make any improvements that you can see or corrections you can make. I'll take a "late lunch" and try and send this about 3~4pm ... until then improve away (checking that all the links work and point to the desired pages is something easy to do and yet to be done, also making the language consistent like always using FOSS or Free an Open Source Software would be neat)
Thanks to everyone who chipped in research, suggested alternatives, examples and words in general :D
That looks great, thanks for putting it all together. I reckon that it's ready to send off. Oh, and I just got a response from Council about what "Business process software purchases" is. Unfortunately, it doesn't make any sense: Casey will be undertaking market testing to procure a business process management software tool to support the development of more efficient and effective processes aimed at delivering a better customer experience and increasing productivity. This will support the Lean business improvement methodology that is being introduced to the organisation.